Hi! what a colorful piece! now im no pro but I'll give it my best shot into helping you improve any way you can. OK this piece caught my eye because of the colors you have chosen, They all blend so well together which makes it a very attractive piece of work. The only fault i can pick is your face area. all it needs is a little more details in some areas and it would've been even better more defined All up this is very nice and i hope you get the praise you deserve and hope to see more of your work when it comes out =^_^=